” A Fine Line ” … wid some music … !!! written & performed by Big Virge

Yes folks, it’s spoken word to a beat ….

NOT RAP !!!!!

But, rhythm placed behind a poet reciting his words, in this case, the words of … Big Virge !!!!!

Enjoy and take it in ….

Some, Pretty Good ish’ …
if I do say so myself !!!!! LOL !!!

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“Are You Ready ?” … A Poem written by Big Virge 1/5/2006

It would seem, on the basis of the post below, that, quite are few are not,
However, i’ll ask anyway ….

So folks …
Are you … Ready … ?
for prose I write …
through use of rhyme
that proves my mind is

….. ” EVER READY ” ……

to spread … Information …
Just like …. ” Confetti ” ….

My use of words
is … RARELY … ” Perverse ” …
and I … ” Rarely ” … Curse …
To Prove …. ” A Point ” ….

I leave that to … ” Boys ” …
to employ … such ploys …
because I find … that style …

…… ANNOYS ……. !!!!!!!!

Don’t get me … ” Wrong ” … !!!

I Like to … ” Cuss ” …
when having … ” FUN ” …
in clubs … and … pubs

But …..
NOT …. when writing ….
words i’m … ” Rhyming ” … !!!

So … ???
Are You Ready … ?
to read … Some More … ?

Wordplay …. Worthy ….
of …. ” Applause ” …. !!?!!

My words … ROCK JAWS … !!!!!
and YES … For Sure …
Should … NEVER EVER … !!!
Be …. “ignored” …. !!!!! ….

Some say … ” My Rhymes ” …
are …. ” Pretty ” …. RAW …. !!!!!

Well …
That’s … because …
My … ” Train of Thought ” …
is …… ” Well Informed ” …..

When … writing about …
People … who … ” FLOUT ” …

When … CLEARLY … they …
Should … ” Shut Dem’ Mout'” … !!!!!

Nowadays …
They’re a … Force … !!!
So … PLEASE … don’t doubt … !!!!

They’re … Running Around …
Like … ” CIRCUS CLOWNS ” … !!?!!

CLEARLY … lost … ???
while I … have … FOUND … !!!

A way to … ASTOUND … !!!
through … use of words …

” Deserving ” … pounds … !!!

So …
Are You Ready … !?!
to see … How Many … ?

” Different ” … styles …
of … ” Different ” … rhymes
I have … Designed …
To Blow … your mind … !!!!!

Well …
HERE … I Go … !!!
to … Give You … flows …
I’ve built in …. ” Prose ” ….

That … PROVE … My Mind …
is … FAR FROM ………. “closed” ………. !!!!!!!

My Mind is … OPEN …
Like a ….. Book ……

Be … CAREFUL … though
You might get … ” SHOOK ” … !!!!!

and ….
I’m NOT … ” Joking ” … !!!!!
Some things … I Write …
Leave … some folks …

…… BROKEN …… !!!!!!!!!!!

“Broken” … because …
I leave them … LOST … !!!
when I prove that … ” I’m ”

The … ” LYRICAL BOSS ” … !!!!!

My wordplay … SHOCKS … !!!
because it …. ” Drops ” ….
Like … U.S. Bombs …
that breed … ” Sad Songs ” …

Sometimes …
It’s written ….
when i’m … MAD … !!!!!

and CLEARLY … ” Hangs ”
Right on … ” The Verge ” …
of … ANGRY … Turns … !!!!

But … ” My Vision’s” …
……… CLEAR …….. !!!!!

When I … ” Observe ” …
“Those” …. whose actions ….
are ….. ” ABSURD ” ……

They’re …. Awaaaaaaaayyyyyy

with the … ” Birds ” … !!!!!
with … visions …

” Blurrr…rrree..ddd ” ….. !!!!!!

Many of you …
may not … ” concur ” …

That’s … up to … You
Trust Me … That’s Cool …
But … ” Watch Yourself ” …
and ….. WATCH …..

” THESE FOOLS ” … !!!!!

Who may just … choose …
to ….. ABUSE YOU ….. !!!!!

Because of … ” Your Race ” …
or because of … PURE HATE …

or because … NO DINNER …
is on …. ” Their Plate ” …. !!!!!

Things … RIGHT NOW …
are … FAR FROM … Great … !!!

Some people …
CLEARLY …..
are … IRATE … !!!!!

Just … walk around …
and … ” Look Pon’ Face ” … !!!

Many youth are … RUDE … !!!
and … Far From … COOL … !!!
and many … ” Carry ” …

…. ANGRY MOODS …. !!!!!

Just check … The News …
You’ll soon … Find Proof … !!!

So ….
Are You Ready … ???
To Help … ” The Cause ” … ?!?

or …..
Will you choose …
to simply … ignore …

Until … PROBLEMS …
Reach … ” Your ” … Front Door … !!?!!

or …. Inside ….
Your … ” Private Home ” … !?!

Many … FEAR … !!!
Living … ALONE … !!!!!

because of … ” VILLAINS ”
in … ” Their Zone ” …
Who … Nowadays Roam …
Like …. Mobile Phones …. !!!!

There … ” Seems to be ” …
So Many … Thieves …
from those on … “Streets” …
to … ” Corrupt MP’s ” … !!!!! …

So …..
Are You Ready … ???
to … Read Some … TRUTH … ?

The … ” Class System’s ” …
CONTROLLING … you … !!!!

They … Raise Issues …
to … DIVIDE … crews …
and … KEEP … ” The Poor ” …
” Outside ” … Boardrooms … !!!!!

” The Web ” … is there …
So they can … “SNARE” … !!!

Whoever they … CHOOSE …
So be …. ” Prepared ” …. !!!!!

Bg Brother’s … WATCHING …

…… EVERYWHERE …… !!!!!

Take a minute …
and ….. THINK ….. !!!!!

INTO … Net … !?!
or … ” Internet ” …

” The Trap’s ” … been set …
Like … Spiders spinning … !!!
… ” Intricate Webs ” …

” Pretty Much ” … EVERYTHING …
is ….. ” Government Spin ” ….. !!!!

Plans they … ” Cook Up ”
are … NOT FOR … Us … !!!!!

They’re … All for … THEM
and their … ” RICH FRIENDS ” … !!!!!

Meanwhile …
They’re … BLAMING …
Us …. ” Immigrants ” ….

I’m …
English … BORN …
But My … ” BLACK SKIN ” …
Means … ” CERTAIN DOORS ” …
are …… OFF LIMITS ……. ?!!!? ……..

“Black and English !?!
Come on now Virge,
are you, quite sure ?!?

You’re an Englishman,
who faces, scorn !!!
because you are,
a bit, too dark !!!!
to fit into, their,
Bourgeoise Class !!!!”

That’s … ” The System ” …
and the …. SCORE …. !!!!!!!!!

Are you ready to …
…… “Listen” ……. !?!
to a … ” Little Bit More ” … ?

If … YES .. is your answer …
Then …. ” Listen Up ” …. !!!!!!

and to those who said ….
…… NOTHING ……

Don’t …
Try to … FRONT … !!!

Some of you … ” Believe ” …
I’m a bit … TOO BLUNT … !!!!

When … The Truth is … ” I’m ” …
… Just having … FUN … !!!!! …

Before …. I face …
Government questions … ?!?
because … ” My Wordplay ” …
Leaves them … STUNNED … !!!!!

When speaking of ….
Their … RACISM … !!!!!

Trust Me Folks … !!!
” Forget ” … The Jokes …

because things … Right Now …
are … Far From … FUNNY … !!!!!

“Poor People” …
Will … DROWN … !!!

for … THE RICH …
to have … ” Money ” … !!!

I’m Trying … MY BEST …
to be … A Poet … who lets …

Knowledge … DROP …
Like …. ” Pennies ” …. !!!

In a style …..
WORD HEAVY … !!!!!

My Last Words … are these …
If … PEACE … is dubbed …
as an ….. ” ENEMY ” ….. ?!?
and things become … WORSE …
than they are … ALREADY … !!!!!!

Let me ask you … THIS … people

….. ” Are You … READY ? ” …..

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“A Fine Line” … A poem written by Big Virge 21/7/2006

Folks …
It is a … ” Fine Line ” … !!!
that … Clearly … Defines …
the road that I … Walk …
with words that I … Rhyme …

cos’ … words that I … talk …
may see me … in … Court … !!!

without … ” Sean ” …
or … ” Just Cause ” … !!!

because of YES … ” Them ” …
Those in … Governments …
and Those … who they … send …
to enforce … ” Poor Judgements ” … !!!!!

but ofcourse … They’ll Contend …
That … My Wordplay … OFFENDS …
and may well stir up … ” Trouble ” … !!!
and cause …. ” VIOLENCE ” …. !!!!! ….

But ….
It’s okay for … THEM … ?!!!?
to say … ” What They Like ” … !???!
and Declare … Their War Fights …
as forms of …. ” Defence ” ….
when plans they … Design …
keep causing … PROBLEMS … !!?!!

Well ….
It doesn’t seem like … ?
their actions are … Right … !?!
When … Every … News Night
The Things … In Our Sight …
KEEP … Showing Us … VISIONS …
of people who … ” DIE ” … !!!!! …

Now ….
That’s A … “Fine Line” …
I have … Re-designed …
from Princes’ … ” Great Song “…
The … ” Sign ‘o’ The Times ” …

So …
Don’t get me … wrong … !!!
My lines are … ” Refined ” …
and Clearly … “BELONG” … !!!
where fine lines … recline …

Each line that I write ….
Proves my mind is …

…… ” Inclined ” ……

to write about crimes
affecting …. Our lives ….

and it is a … “Fine Line’ …
that helps me to … FIND …
a way to … ” Express ” … !!! …

My … ” Anger and Stress ” …
About … How We … TRY … !!!
to do … what is … “RIGHT” … !!!!

But …..
What does this mean ?!?
in a world so … “Unclean” … !!!!!

What do we stand for … ?
when going to … WAR … !?!

We should take a ……………..
………………………………………

…… Pause …………..

and … THINK of … Our Cause …
Is making …. Blood …. POUR ….
what we’re … Really here for … ?!!!?

If you’re thinking … “YES” …
Are you …. ” Really Sure ” …. ???

How would you feel ?

if the blood poured
was ….. YOURS …… !!!

or ….
Someone … YOU LOVED … !!!
and Really … Cared For … !!!!!!

Well
As these lines … State …

It is a … “Thin Line” …
between YES …..

” Love and Hate ” …

but ….

“Hating” … For REAL … !!!
Won’t help us … Relate … !!!

These days …
it’s quite … CLEAR …
The Dangers of … FEAR … !!!!!

But …
That’s … Nothing New … !!!

The past’s given clues …
of how … IGNORANCE … Fuels …
individuals to … USE …
Torture and … “Abuse” …
Through crews filled with … FOOLS …
who think … Hatred … IS COOL … !!!!?!!!!

Well ….
Hatred Profiled …
Does NOT … !!! …
Lead to … Smiles …

It leads to a … place …
That’s Not … quite so great …
and leads us … though leaders …
who like to …. DICTATE ….

Like those around …. NOW …. !!!
who want to … “Clamp Down” …
on people like …. me ….
whose wordplay’s … So Neat …

That …. Our Poetry ….
Gives Policemen … ” A Beat ” …
That makes them … RETREAT … !!!!!

See what I mean … !!!

My … Poetry Seams …
are … Suitably … Clean …
and walk a … Fine Line …
of … ” Quality Rhymes ” …
that … Bypass … Extremes …

because they’re … Inclined …
to …. ” UNIFY ” …. minds ….

See …. that’s how i’d like
My Wordplay … DEFINED … !!!!!

Speaking … Your Mind …
Should … NOT BE … A Crime … !!!!!

Unless what you say …
Divides and spreads …

…… ” HATE ” ….. !!!!!

I’d rather spread … ” LOVE ” …
Through … ” Kisses and Hugs ” … !!!

while most now … Indulge …

In Acting like … THUGS …
and taking … HARD DRUGS …
when they’ve …. had ….
… ” Quite ENOUGH ” … !!!!!

People like … THESE …
make me want to … CUSS … !!!!!!!

But ….
These days i’m … TRYING …
to … Rise uP …. ABOVE ….

These … ” Wannabee Thugs ”

Who spread talk of … ” Dying ”
cos’ their words … NEED … !!!

……. ” Refining ” ……. !!!!!!

Things you … Put Out …
Come back son …

…. ” Don’t Doubt ” …. !!!!!

Now, that’s a … Fine Line …
that’s got … Lots of … CLOUT … !!!

So think … CAREFULLY … !!!
before … Running Your Mouth … !!!!!

Fine Lines … that I write …
of … Upsetting Designs …
are … NOT to … Start Fights … !!!

So ….
REMEMBER … That Line … !!!!!

They may cause … Offence …
and may cause … Arguments …

But ……
USE …. ” Common Sense ” ….
and … REJECT … ” Violence ” … !!!

Keep a … ” Cool Head ” …
Like … “Des Dekker” … said … !!!!!

Then … Pick up a … PEN
rather than … Make Attempts …
to bring me …. DISTRESS …. !!!!!!!

cos’ you …
want to … SUPPRESS
A view i’ve expressed …
that’s left you … UPSET … !!!!!

That message is … SENT …
to those … ” Jealous Gents ” …
Who Think they’re the … BEST …
at writing … Fine Lines …
with words that they … Rhyme …

Well … CLEARLY …
They’re … “BLIND” … !!! …
and … Out of Their … Mind … !!!!!!

to think that … Their Rhymes …
are … Better Than … MINE … ?!? …

Those causing us … STRESS … !!! …
are those in … ” Governments ” … !!!!!

They … Plan to … DIVIDE …
NOT … see us … ” UNITE ” … !!!!!

THINK … about that …
before starting … FIGHTS … !!!!!

” Black On Black ” …. crime …
has been … ” Long Designed ” …

Don’t You … think it’s time … ?!?

We start to fight … THEM … ?!?!?
and their … ” Bogus Systems ” … !!!

That’s where …..

I will … END …
This simple … Poem …

cos’ …

Words in … ” Those Lines ” …
May … cause me … PROBLEMS … !!!!!

Even though ….

Their JUST … Rhymes
that flow … and … DEFINE
How the words … I Transcribe …

REALLY WALK … !!! …

…. ” A Fine Line ” ….

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